Post by justsarah on Nov 1, 2011 10:31:33 GMT -5
Final Outline
In a previous incarnation, she chose to abstain from romantic relationships, even further then her own kind back in her own world. She only had sexual relations because it was thought to be good for the body.
She deals with emotions by being more subdued compared to Earth humans, who use them as weapons to influences political elections, passing of varying laws that do not benefit human kind as a whole, that leads to spiritual dark ages to humans involved.
Peculiarly, there is one past experience that is hard for her overcome. She feels partially responsible for not warning the inhabitants of Malona, that their planet was going to be destroyed. Luckily her brothers and sisters were able to warn them in time, and the inhabitants were able to evacuate the planet. She has since vowed to prove to her brothers and sisters that she is not a failure.
She especially considers it her personal responsibility to aid humans passively out of a spiritual dark age, so that Earth humans may eventually join her brothers and sisters. She also wants to warn Earth humans of a coming fake alien invasion by Reptilian X on Earth. This will not be a war like WWIII, but instead a war of the minds, including psychological warfare.
Despite her love and worries for Earth humans, she fears that, if she becomes to intimate with an Earth human, that she will fall back into similar negative influences that cause Earth humans to be how they are. After successfully driving away the rogue reptilians and making them evacuate, she dies in her current body of radiation poisoning. She was reborn into a male, and grew up without a mother, who died birthing the child. The star on the forehead they were born with, would later give them frequent headaches.
The childs grandfather, who worked for CNN, died in the world trade center collapse when she was 13. Edward regarded the news as mostly filled with disinformation, realized it was just a job. Before running away from home, she came to grips with being trans-gendered, and started wearing more feminine clothing. She slept in the basement, where she was home schooled.
When she ran away from home due to a father that never showed her any love, she contemplated hanging herself. When she ran away, she was nearly mugged by two bloods, and a giant human spider hybrid that kills them, and saves her for a special snack.
She manages to have one powerful kick that causes major pain right in its nut sack. She is rescued by Slephner, who takes an attraction to her. He tried asking her if she had a home, but her speech impediment makes things difficult.
These days, she is part of the starship boarding school soccer team. Knowing Slephner was a homophobe, she lived constantly in fear of being found out she was born male. Of coarse communication would be difficult anyway, due to a tongue injury in her younger years, would made it difficult to pronounce some letters. Ellen just wants to life a normal life as a high school girl. It helps that she passes well enough for her best friend Malcolm not to suspect anything.
Her favorite book, was Hans Christians Anderson's Novel A Little Mermaid, of which she reads for leisure. She read the book many times, upsides down, right side up, left to right, and right to left to make sure she absorbed all the contents.
Ellen meets Richard, during a boarding school soccer game. She is attracted to the fact that he can build small robots, of which she always wanted one but feared having one for it not being girly enough. She asks him if he could build her a robot dog someday.
She is hesitant to make a move at first, fearing he might be homophobic. The joke was on her though, when he asked her if she wanted to go out for a coffee sometimes. Here, she finds out he's openly bi-sexual, and probably would not of cared. In fact, she finds out Richard briefly "dated" Malcolm. But with a new relationship, came a new fear.
Ellen feels mixed feelings of joy for finally finding someone that loves for who she is, and not what she is, and fearing that someday Richard will find someone else he loves more. She feel some anger for Richards father, who lied to his family about his where abouts during the war, leading Richard to grow up without a father.
She has been slightly confused about his feelings for her, as he seems to spend most of his time building robot dogs, like he used too when he was thirteen. She also feels some guilt for falling for an Earth human, when it has been strictly forbidden by her people.
These feelings enefest when she is visited by Richard and Malcolm at her soccer game. Slephner is still slightly possessive of her, and she is initially hesitant to tell him she doesnt have feelings for him anymore. While Richard goes back to his dorm, Malcolm and Ellen go visit his sister, who is dieing from luekemia?
Ellen has an akward social life, having a hard time speaking because of her inability to pronounce certain letters due to an injury. However her Relationship with Malcolm is at least somewhat normal. Malcolm was the type of guy that even if he didnt like a particularly activity, he would go anyway to support his friends interest. He loved to munch on the hot dogs at the stadium, which caused him to gain some weight since they started going to the starship boarding school.
Ellen finally decides to resolve her feelings for Richard, when she got back to her dorm, by sending Richard a call. He wasnt available to answer, because he was busy making his robotic dog for Ellen. He missed the call five times, and eventually Ellen decided to give up and go to bed. This would be the last night Richard would see Ellen alive, for the next morning her head was taken off in an elevator accident.
Eve Is Built By Richard, by cloning Ellen who died in an elevator accident. He used copies of her memories to form Eves memories, essentially becoming Ellen in his own mind. The problem is, because the human body he used already had its own soul, the being who he called Eve, because he considering himself a god of a new breed of life forms, has essentially become two soul. (This will be important later.)
When it was discovered she had psycho kinetic powers from an unknown source (The Ellen side of her body was a reincarnation of a starseed who gave her life and successfully psychologically drove off an alien invasion), they attempted to use her as a weapon of war. They subjected her to white torture experiments, to see if she would give into varying forms of interrogation techniques it was theorized that malevolent Ets from other worlds would use.
After being forced to watch her cyclone and androids friends be torn to spreads, she snapped and attempted to take over the government facility. Once subdued, she was locked in a chamber that could contain even a 100,000,000 Megaton Hydrogen bomb. As she sat in this cell, because she had two souls, Eve is constantly haunted by her previous lives death by an elevator accident, where her head was taken off. She also saw Richard in her dream, and saw that he loved Ellen to the point of total insanity.
She used this as a blow to escape, and was able to trick Richard into setting her free, because this was like putting Ellen in jail. She then takes over the facility, until a peace agreement was settled between her people (The clones), a colonized a planet called Terra II. However this ploy ends in tragedy, because on Terra II, the clones misunderstand her message. And cause a planet wide civil war. Eve, who felt she betrayed her own people the plejeren, takes her own life and symbolically jumps off the highest creation. Perhaps maybe, without her negative influence in the world, she could be forgiven.
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Since its going to be a very, what I call quiet graphic novel (Very little dialogue), I'll need some help with facial expression to convey information.
Im glad you corrected that. I understand perfectly on the he/she issue...but the reader of your story may not. 
