Post by justsarah on Nov 15, 2011 13:11:46 GMT -5
And post this. A comic adaptation of all five parts may be coming up, but I'll post the story version first:
[Begin]
Undecided Title
By Sarah Weaver
1. Terran
I need to get home to my cabin, so I can feed my dog. I fear it might get late before I get home. Last time, I had to shake the dog off of me, who was hungry because I forgot to feed it that morning.
I use to enjoy the sundown as I rode home on my bike. But these days I hated it because for some reason I always have to hurry home. I always feel like somethings chasing me.
When I got home, my dog was sleeping on my couch. I walked over to pet him, be he tried to bite me. Thats not normal for my him. For other dogs sure, but mine? I poured him some food, and he scurried for the bowl.
I sat dog on the couch, and reflected on my life so far. I use to feel angry about my friend Tom Tom, who use to try to discourage me from pursuing that one goal I always wanted done. But I realize now he is not all there anyway.
Maybe I can give him a call...,
....
.....No Answer!
I walked into my bedroom, turned the light out, and tried to get some sleep. I was awoken by dog, who was clawing at my door all creepy like.
"I'm sorry, I got to sleep alone tonight." I said.
The next morning I woke up to a loud rustling of leaves. I walked outside my front door, and I saw saw a ufo hovering roughly 500 feet in the air in the grassland, outside the forest where my home was.
As I tried to walk closer, I got a headache. And then it crashed into the ground, while caused me to fly into the air. And then I saw its lid pop open, and I saw a blond woman walk out. She appeared to be roughly sixteen.
"Wo landete ich jetzt, meine Eltern haben vor, Me zu töten" I heard her say. I don't speak German, so I couldn't understand it. I then started my decline back into the ground.
Instead of the ground, I landed headfirst into cockpit. She turned around to see I was in the first. She pointed her beam gun at me, and I put my hands up. "Kommen Sie aus meinem beamship jetzt heraus, oder ich werde schießen!"
"Its not what you think I promise. I don't speak Aryan either." But it was no use, she was scared out of her wits of me. Hey now, she was the one visiting me. Before I could get out, the lid closed on its own. Before she could process that I didn't speak German, the ship was took me to her world!
"Warum vergaß ich, Autopiloten auszuschalten?" She said.
2. The Erran
You know I just feel so motivated to return home. But at the same time, you know how I just love how I crashed on this planet. I told her "Get out of my ship, or I'll shoot."
"Its not what you think, I promise." She said. I took at look at her, quite the gruesome appearance I say. You know how I don't want to grab that ass. Of coarse before I could explain myself, because I forgot to turn off auto-pilot, she was flown back to my world.
I know she wouldn't be confused for looking like me, after all we look nothing alike. Either way, you know how I don't want to get my ship back. After all, its just nuts and bolts, and a ride home. I took a look into where she lived.
"Oooh, well her home looks rather uncomfortable, don't you think?" I giggled. But then I became serious, and thought:
Of coarse I don't fear that if my ship isnt returned to me, that my parents won't send the universal patrol after me, to get me to come home. And I just love the thought of going back there, where I can have creational laws rammed down my throat. So much for not violating free will!
I used to just hate, taking my spiritual journeys. Those people on different worlds certainly didn't need our guidance, I thought at the time. But now, it makes me even less happy to return home. Those lessons didn't get boring.
Violating free will isnt chicken feces, we high elves aren't chowder monkeys after all! If you don't save yourselves from a comet, you definitely eat yellow snow right? I walked inside the house, and saw a dog. It didn't seem scared of me at all, it never bit me when I tried to pet him. Of coarse I don't kick dogs, what do you think I am, a high elf? Wait....
As I began to sit on the womans couch, I could not here a car rolling in the driveway at all. The footsteps walking on the gravel, didnt make it sound like they were more than three feet tall! I heard the door knock. Of coarse I just wanted to open the door right, after all the person must be harmless. I didn't walk to the door anyway, it was good to not swallow your fear. I peeped through the hole.
Hmmm, not to attractive look a guy, but man was he little. His head didn't reach the roof at all. I asked "Who is it, may I help you?"
"Hey Matt, could you let me in? Remember you called me last night. Sorry I was at work." The man said. Oh right, because my name is Matt after all right! The ever present isn't a jerkwad at all! I opened the door anyway. I let him in.
"Holy gumdrop, Matt! Did you finally start estrogen. I'd hate to admit it, but your actually look like a hot woman. But your still a man right now." The man said. I thought:
"Oh sure, I absolutely recognize you completely." I said. I'm going to be straight with you, and say this one thing how I actually mean it. The girls friend really was a giant, even though I'm tall for a girl my age being 5'9. He he seems like a friendly giant so far.
[/Part One & Two]
By the way, no I don't always write horror. Its just what I right most often. This is more of a Romantic comedy/Yuri story. ...Yea I know thats a weird combo.
The visual novel will probably have an alternate ending, based on how well you treat each character. The Anti-Hero ending, and The Student ending. Its up to you which you prefer.
By the way, the space girl is actually suppose to be a very situation and verbally ironic character. She often means the opposite of what she's saying.
[Begin]
Undecided Title
By Sarah Weaver
1. Terran
I need to get home to my cabin, so I can feed my dog. I fear it might get late before I get home. Last time, I had to shake the dog off of me, who was hungry because I forgot to feed it that morning.
I use to enjoy the sundown as I rode home on my bike. But these days I hated it because for some reason I always have to hurry home. I always feel like somethings chasing me.
When I got home, my dog was sleeping on my couch. I walked over to pet him, be he tried to bite me. Thats not normal for my him. For other dogs sure, but mine? I poured him some food, and he scurried for the bowl.
I sat dog on the couch, and reflected on my life so far. I use to feel angry about my friend Tom Tom, who use to try to discourage me from pursuing that one goal I always wanted done. But I realize now he is not all there anyway.
Maybe I can give him a call...,
....
.....No Answer!
I walked into my bedroom, turned the light out, and tried to get some sleep. I was awoken by dog, who was clawing at my door all creepy like.
"I'm sorry, I got to sleep alone tonight." I said.
The next morning I woke up to a loud rustling of leaves. I walked outside my front door, and I saw saw a ufo hovering roughly 500 feet in the air in the grassland, outside the forest where my home was.
As I tried to walk closer, I got a headache. And then it crashed into the ground, while caused me to fly into the air. And then I saw its lid pop open, and I saw a blond woman walk out. She appeared to be roughly sixteen.
"Wo landete ich jetzt, meine Eltern haben vor, Me zu töten" I heard her say. I don't speak German, so I couldn't understand it. I then started my decline back into the ground.
Instead of the ground, I landed headfirst into cockpit. She turned around to see I was in the first. She pointed her beam gun at me, and I put my hands up. "Kommen Sie aus meinem beamship jetzt heraus, oder ich werde schießen!"
"Its not what you think I promise. I don't speak Aryan either." But it was no use, she was scared out of her wits of me. Hey now, she was the one visiting me. Before I could get out, the lid closed on its own. Before she could process that I didn't speak German, the ship was took me to her world!
"Warum vergaß ich, Autopiloten auszuschalten?" She said.
2. The Erran
You know I just feel so motivated to return home. But at the same time, you know how I just love how I crashed on this planet. I told her "Get out of my ship, or I'll shoot."
"Its not what you think, I promise." She said. I took at look at her, quite the gruesome appearance I say. You know how I don't want to grab that ass. Of coarse before I could explain myself, because I forgot to turn off auto-pilot, she was flown back to my world.
I know she wouldn't be confused for looking like me, after all we look nothing alike. Either way, you know how I don't want to get my ship back. After all, its just nuts and bolts, and a ride home. I took a look into where she lived.
"Oooh, well her home looks rather uncomfortable, don't you think?" I giggled. But then I became serious, and thought:
Of sure, I totally get why my parents find Earth men so scary.
I actually thought she was kind of ugly,
I don't wonder what she looks like in the shower at all.
...You know how we just have the perfect track
record during the time of Lyra, Mu, and Atlantis!
We aren't hypocrites, honest!
I actually thought she was kind of ugly,
I don't wonder what she looks like in the shower at all.
...You know how we just have the perfect track
record during the time of Lyra, Mu, and Atlantis!
We aren't hypocrites, honest!
Of coarse I don't fear that if my ship isnt returned to me, that my parents won't send the universal patrol after me, to get me to come home. And I just love the thought of going back there, where I can have creational laws rammed down my throat. So much for not violating free will!
I used to just hate, taking my spiritual journeys. Those people on different worlds certainly didn't need our guidance, I thought at the time. But now, it makes me even less happy to return home. Those lessons didn't get boring.
Violating free will isnt chicken feces, we high elves aren't chowder monkeys after all! If you don't save yourselves from a comet, you definitely eat yellow snow right? I walked inside the house, and saw a dog. It didn't seem scared of me at all, it never bit me when I tried to pet him. Of coarse I don't kick dogs, what do you think I am, a high elf? Wait....
As I began to sit on the womans couch, I could not here a car rolling in the driveway at all. The footsteps walking on the gravel, didnt make it sound like they were more than three feet tall! I heard the door knock. Of coarse I just wanted to open the door right, after all the person must be harmless. I didn't walk to the door anyway, it was good to not swallow your fear. I peeped through the hole.
Hmmm, not to attractive look a guy, but man was he little. His head didn't reach the roof at all. I asked "Who is it, may I help you?"
"Hey Matt, could you let me in? Remember you called me last night. Sorry I was at work." The man said. Oh right, because my name is Matt after all right! The ever present isn't a jerkwad at all! I opened the door anyway. I let him in.
"Holy gumdrop, Matt! Did you finally start estrogen. I'd hate to admit it, but your actually look like a hot woman. But your still a man right now." The man said. I thought:
Oh man, I might actually hate both genders,
Seriously, I'm just positive she was a man!!!
Seriously, I'm just positive she was a man!!!
"Oh sure, I absolutely recognize you completely." I said. I'm going to be straight with you, and say this one thing how I actually mean it. The girls friend really was a giant, even though I'm tall for a girl my age being 5'9. He he seems like a friendly giant so far.
[/Part One & Two]
By the way, no I don't always write horror. Its just what I right most often. This is more of a Romantic comedy/Yuri story. ...Yea I know thats a weird combo.
The visual novel will probably have an alternate ending, based on how well you treat each character. The Anti-Hero ending, and The Student ending. Its up to you which you prefer.
By the way, the space girl is actually suppose to be a very situation and verbally ironic character. She often means the opposite of what she's saying.
