Post by justsarah on Dec 5, 2011 11:43:07 GMT -5
Since I'll writing the novelization here, and a friend of mines doing the art, I think its safe to post more than 2 chapters. Apparently the rules of this other place, is you can't post more then three chapters of art. Anywho, chapter three:
"What do you remember of what happened that night Jeinkaru?"
"Nothing, nothing at all?"
"Are you sure?"
Images in the head switched to their bathroom door.
"The only thing I remember."
Images in their head switched to the blood covered floor.
"I opened the door, and I screamed. Then I blacked out."
"Have you still felt suicidal?"
".... ....."
Jeinkaru's innocent gaze switched from innocent, to a look of shock. Their wide eyed gaze was evident. Jeinkaru's mouth was moving.
Jeinkaru exited the evaluators office. And then they sat on the bench right outside. Images flashed in their mind. They can still smell the stench of iron....
"What's wrong with her?
"You should have seen her face mam. I don't think I can sleep tonight looking in that face."
"What Happened?"
"Look, I still think Jeinkaru's in a bit of shock. We don't even really know how much they remember about their first gaurdian."
The caretaker walked out, and quietly closed the door, then hugged Jeinkaru, who's gaze was still blank.
"Everything is going to be ok Jein. Were going to get you some help."
The two are walking out of the building.
The next morning, Jeinkaru is following Ajalla to school. Jeinkaru grabs Ajalla's arm. Ajalla look back at the blank pleading stare.
"Want to race to school?" Jeinkaru asked.
"I'm sorry." Ajalla said.
"...Why...not!" Jeinkaru asks.
"....we can do it tommorrow." Ajalla says, and begins to hug her.
Jeinkaru storms off crying.
"Jein...wait!"
The rain is dropping upon the hardened dirt.
In reading class, Jeinkaru is quiet. She is pretending like Ajalla doesnt exist. Ajalla is worried about her, and delves into her thoughts: Daddy....no!
And then Ajalla's image in his head switches to a bathroom. What looks like Jein's first guardian, is lying naked in the bathtub. The tub is filled with blood.
The teacher calls Ajalla back in the real world.
"Ajalla, pay attention please. You need to read page 152."
Jeinkaru is batting their eyes in feeling confused, and then smiles at Ajalla faintly. Ajalla grabs Jeins arm after all when she walked out of the classroom.
"Look, we can stil.."
"Its ok AJ. I understand."
The next morning, Ajalla and Jein are racing to school. Jeinkaru tackles Ajalla, to make sure they are there first.
"Cheater!." Ajalla says.
[/end]
Yea, it was a bit painful to write this chapter, so I didnt feel like dwelling as long as I normally would.D: The script is actually 10 pages.
Chapter 3
"What do you remember of what happened that night Jeinkaru?"
"Nothing, nothing at all?"
"Are you sure?"
Images in the head switched to their bathroom door.
"The only thing I remember."
Images in their head switched to the blood covered floor.
"I opened the door, and I screamed. Then I blacked out."
"Have you still felt suicidal?"
".... ....."
Jeinkaru's innocent gaze switched from innocent, to a look of shock. Their wide eyed gaze was evident. Jeinkaru's mouth was moving.
Jeinkaru exited the evaluators office. And then they sat on the bench right outside. Images flashed in their mind. They can still smell the stench of iron....
"What's wrong with her?
"You should have seen her face mam. I don't think I can sleep tonight looking in that face."
"What Happened?"
"Look, I still think Jeinkaru's in a bit of shock. We don't even really know how much they remember about their first gaurdian."
The caretaker walked out, and quietly closed the door, then hugged Jeinkaru, who's gaze was still blank.
"Everything is going to be ok Jein. Were going to get you some help."
The two are walking out of the building.
The next morning, Jeinkaru is following Ajalla to school. Jeinkaru grabs Ajalla's arm. Ajalla look back at the blank pleading stare.
"Want to race to school?" Jeinkaru asked.
"I'm sorry." Ajalla said.
"...Why...not!" Jeinkaru asks.
"....we can do it tommorrow." Ajalla says, and begins to hug her.
Jeinkaru storms off crying.
"Jein...wait!"
The rain is dropping upon the hardened dirt.
In reading class, Jeinkaru is quiet. She is pretending like Ajalla doesnt exist. Ajalla is worried about her, and delves into her thoughts: Daddy....no!
And then Ajalla's image in his head switches to a bathroom. What looks like Jein's first guardian, is lying naked in the bathtub. The tub is filled with blood.
The teacher calls Ajalla back in the real world.
"Ajalla, pay attention please. You need to read page 152."
Jeinkaru is batting their eyes in feeling confused, and then smiles at Ajalla faintly. Ajalla grabs Jeins arm after all when she walked out of the classroom.
"Look, we can stil.."
"Its ok AJ. I understand."
The next morning, Ajalla and Jein are racing to school. Jeinkaru tackles Ajalla, to make sure they are there first.
"Cheater!." Ajalla says.
[/end]
Yea, it was a bit painful to write this chapter, so I didnt feel like dwelling as long as I normally would.D: The script is actually 10 pages.
Screenplay version of the first chapter is done. Total in roughly about 15 minutes.
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