Post by justsarah on Feb 14, 2012 10:38:18 GMT -5
I decided I'd go ahead and post of a short story that functions as part of a larger work, but as a stand alone bastard introduction story. Its sort of a modern day twist on saving the princess, except its saving the Mayors daughter this time.
And then later it goes into how vary remnants of Rafadelis remained after nuclear world war 3. This is sort of like a prologue, and based fairly loosely on a dream I had.
Page One -
Panel 1. Our general remembered when he ate lunch in the cafeteria in his colledge when a childhood friend came to sit lunch with him that day.
Panel 2. His name was Karrie, who was a wide eyed homosexual brunnete boy, who looked more like a girl than a boy.
Page Two -
Panel 1.
"Hey, do you remember me?"
"No."
Panel 2.
"Come on, surely you remember this face."
"Never seen you before."
Panel 3.
"Well I remember you."
Page Three -
Panel 1.
"Good for you."
"Do you remember when we used to play together?"
Panel 2.
"Your giving me the creeps."
"Both of our families lived along the coast, you always wore a swimsuit..."
Page Four -
Panel 1.
"And you used to skinny dip!."
"Right"
Panel 2.
"That was when I had feelings for you. Then I found out you were a boy."
"Hey, by the way you noticed those blockheads gathering around the table near you?"
Panel 3.
"Didnt notice."
Page Five -
Panel 1.
"That's Rafadelis right?"
"The Modern Templarhood. Why are they here?
Panel 2.
"Didn't you look at the news?"
"No I didn't."
"Their looking for recruits. don't join the blockheads man. I need you here! We were attacked by Islamic terrorists."
"False flag most likely."
Panel 3.
"You think so?"
Page Seven -
Panel 1.
"Obviously, you remember 9/11 right?
Panel 2.
"But it's.."
"Don't be a fool Karrie. Remember, this is our government ruled by Rafadelis."
Panel 3.
"Rafadelis, wasn't the Modern American Templars named after that one guy?"
"You think he'll start World War 3?"
Page Eight -
Panel 1. Our general snaps back to the present.
Panel 2. The Leutinent and the others are waiting for him.
Panel 3. Time to continue looking for Esmeralda.
And then later it goes into how vary remnants of Rafadelis remained after nuclear world war 3. This is sort of like a prologue, and based fairly loosely on a dream I had.
Finding Esmeralda
Page One -
Panel 1. Our general remembered when he ate lunch in the cafeteria in his colledge when a childhood friend came to sit lunch with him that day.
Panel 2. His name was Karrie, who was a wide eyed homosexual brunnete boy, who looked more like a girl than a boy.
Page Two -
Panel 1.
"Hey, do you remember me?"
"No."
Panel 2.
"Come on, surely you remember this face."
"Never seen you before."
Panel 3.
"Well I remember you."
Page Three -
Panel 1.
"Good for you."
"Do you remember when we used to play together?"
Panel 2.
"Your giving me the creeps."
"Both of our families lived along the coast, you always wore a swimsuit..."
Page Four -
Panel 1.
"And you used to skinny dip!."
"Right"
Panel 2.
"That was when I had feelings for you. Then I found out you were a boy."
"Hey, by the way you noticed those blockheads gathering around the table near you?"
Panel 3.
"Didnt notice."
Page Five -
Panel 1.
"That's Rafadelis right?"
"The Modern Templarhood. Why are they here?
Panel 2.
"Didn't you look at the news?"
"No I didn't."
"Their looking for recruits. don't join the blockheads man. I need you here! We were attacked by Islamic terrorists."
"False flag most likely."
Panel 3.
"You think so?"
Page Seven -
Panel 1.
"Obviously, you remember 9/11 right?
Panel 2.
"But it's.."
"Don't be a fool Karrie. Remember, this is our government ruled by Rafadelis."
Panel 3.
"Rafadelis, wasn't the Modern American Templars named after that one guy?"
"You think he'll start World War 3?"
Page Eight -
Panel 1. Our general snaps back to the present.
Panel 2. The Leutinent and the others are waiting for him.
Panel 3. Time to continue looking for Esmeralda.
