Post by Babylonian Warrior on Aug 17, 2012 11:33:58 GMT -5
The Sheltered Utopia
Chapter 1 intro
It’s a perfect society so one bickers no one complains.
They live in what we are told is called a “shelter” and a “utopia”. Nothing ever goes wrong in there perfect little lives each are given jobs after taking something called the j-pet. The j-pet is a job placement examination text the questions are based off of what the overseers think of them. For instance, if a male grows up getting in trouble be may tested to be a soldier or a guard, and if a female grows up a snotty brat she be comes an authority or she is given a shot and never seen again.
My name is Mikel, I and 10 years old and I an am getting ready for my j-pet in 2 years. My big brother is Xavier he just got his fourth strike, one more and he is sent to camp. I myself have one strike and the seers say “you must be care so you don’t end up like your father.” But I don’t know my father or what on even is. I don’t want to end up like a father it sounds bad and I don’t want any more trouble.
I am a Seer... The Seer. I do what I can to help those in need but I never prevail. Today, Xavier was given his last shot and it never to be seen again. I cried for I and only I feel the pain brought on these poor people. They know what they are told for they are told nothing. The overseers and the underseers are just as they but more knowing they give them the “correct” knowledge. I am what some call “The keeper”. I am the keeper I know of what the speak but they know not of it is just a name to them. I keep and memories in my home and in my head of the past Memories of pain, happiness… death. The know not of happiness or pain or even death. But may misshapenness resolve in there demise. I say a word such as father to them and then the little one ask questions to the underseers then they are no more.
Chapter 1 intro
It’s a perfect society so one bickers no one complains.
They live in what we are told is called a “shelter” and a “utopia”. Nothing ever goes wrong in there perfect little lives each are given jobs after taking something called the j-pet. The j-pet is a job placement examination text the questions are based off of what the overseers think of them. For instance, if a male grows up getting in trouble be may tested to be a soldier or a guard, and if a female grows up a snotty brat she be comes an authority or she is given a shot and never seen again.
My name is Mikel, I and 10 years old and I an am getting ready for my j-pet in 2 years. My big brother is Xavier he just got his fourth strike, one more and he is sent to camp. I myself have one strike and the seers say “you must be care so you don’t end up like your father.” But I don’t know my father or what on even is. I don’t want to end up like a father it sounds bad and I don’t want any more trouble.
I am a Seer... The Seer. I do what I can to help those in need but I never prevail. Today, Xavier was given his last shot and it never to be seen again. I cried for I and only I feel the pain brought on these poor people. They know what they are told for they are told nothing. The overseers and the underseers are just as they but more knowing they give them the “correct” knowledge. I am what some call “The keeper”. I am the keeper I know of what the speak but they know not of it is just a name to them. I keep and memories in my home and in my head of the past Memories of pain, happiness… death. The know not of happiness or pain or even death. But may misshapenness resolve in there demise. I say a word such as father to them and then the little one ask questions to the underseers then they are no more.
